I took a walk one day
At that forest by the bay.
In the midst of trees,
Eucalyptus high up and mighty,
Pines as far as you can see.
The air was crisp and clean
Fresh with scents unspoiled.
Looking so small in my company
Ego was held in check. My soul
Raised me to a climax far and beyond.
I began to see clear. As the trail wind
Up and twisted; glimpse of the concrete
City was there at the corner of my eye.
You see things clear from above, and
I saw decay. I witnessed aggression of
Man against Nature beyond compare.
Even here, at the cropped
Forest, goodness green and pure-
Pushed away to the limit.
I heard the trees moan. Rain began
Trickling disparately cleansing away
The smog, brushing it from the leaves.
As I walked towards the end of the
Trail, I noticed tree corpses everywhere.
I looked up to the sky, to the trees,
And wept with the rain.
©Gainperspectiveblog3/30/16
Very very nice.
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Thank you very much.
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I love this. Your prose is wondrous.
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Thank you for the kind words. I’m glad for the offer and will contact you shortly.
Best wishes to you.
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Love “wept with the rain”!
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Thank you. I meant it as in agreement with nature in feeling sorry for the destruction of man; as well as for taking a positive action towards reversing the damage. Thank you so much for noticing and your kind remark 🙂
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Indeed, it’s a perfect end-line to the poem.
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Reblogged this on Awaken as One in Peace and commented:
Sweet Peace to you.
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Peace be upon you as well 🙂 Thank you so much.
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I really love the nature! And i love your posts! But why kill a tree? 😦 By the way,Dahlia,from wich country are you? I’m from Bulgaria. 🙂
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Some people chop trees to make way for roads and houses. I don’t like that at all. This poem is to express how awful it is to destroy nature, instead we should protect it.
You are from Bulgaria?! How wonderful. I have visited Bulgaria when I was a kid with my parents. I have been to Sophia and Varna. I loved the beaches in Varna. I remember eating a very hard loaf of bread called “Khrebto” or something. Please correct me.
I am from the U.S. and live in California.
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Well,i don’t like either that they make houses from trees,and they chop down trees for no reason.By the way you’ve been in Varna?I’m gonna go there.And if you were confused where i was,i was just not opening my blog,that’s all.By the way check my post,please,if you have time.If not,i’m gonna wait until you can like it. 🙂
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And,sorry,if i’m annoying that every time i’m telling you to like my posts… 😦
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